Inviting everybody to be a critique here.

I am fairly new to after effects. exploring my creative side, and would love if you all can suggest what

  1. did I miss
  2. did wrong
  3. maybe did right too.

i know it's just keyframes, but I am trying not to rush this time, and take more baby steps.

https://reddit.com/link/1i7z37v/video/79rm01h5tpee1/player